Perfect composition, splitting the image to thirds. Nice play with depth of field and macro, strong symetry. The water droplets make this image interesting. This image would be perfect hanging on a wall.
On the minus side: the composition is so perfect, that it is losing some of originality. This is somehow emphasized by the symmetry of the photograph. Maybe if the focus would be slightly less perfect, out of the center of main subject. Maybe adding colors would make it interesting, or maybe it would break it. And worst of all, the watermark is ruining it. Breaking the whole symmetry and spoiling the impact.
To conclude: this image is too perfect for my taste. But it is excellent work without any doubts.
-- Y fyn Duw a Fydd L'homme est né libre, mais partout il est dans les fers Qui custodiet ipsos custodes?
[The only path to HEAVEN is via HELL] Nemo me impune lacessit Amor numquam morit
-- Y fyn Duw a Fydd L'homme est né libre, mais partout il est dans les fers Qui custodiet ipsos custodes?
[The only path to HEAVEN is via HELL] Nemo me impune lacessit Amor numquam morit
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On the minus side: the composition is so perfect, that it is losing some of originality. This is somehow emphasized by the symmetry of the photograph. Maybe if the focus would be slightly less perfect, out of the center of main subject. Maybe adding colors would make it interesting, or maybe it would break it. And worst of all, the watermark is ruining it. Breaking the whole symmetry and spoiling the impact.
To conclude: this image is too perfect for my taste. But it is excellent work without any doubts.
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